how could he
he ate my bacon
that bastard
Time is... Too Slow for those who Wait Too Swift for those who Fear Too Long for those who Grieve Too Short for those who Rejoice But for those who Love Time is not --Henry Van Dyke
There they stood, ranged along the hillsides,met To view the last of me, a living frame For one more picture! In a sheet of flame I saw them and I knew them all. And yet Dauntless the slug-horn to my lips I set, And blew. 'Childe Roland to the Dark Tower came.' --Robert Browning
The fragrance always remains in the hand that gives the rose. --Heda Bejar
3 comments:
With two extra syllables on each line, it's a haiku.
-rt
no no no. You should have read the previous comments. Megan said the same thing. But the 5-7-5 is the traditional Japanese, but English expresses more in less words(syllables) so it defeats the purpose of the Haiku to use so many syllables in English. Hence, 3-5-2 or even 2-3-2 for a challenge.
Okay. You can call it a "Blaiku".
-rt
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