Re: Hardy Boys manuscript submission
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Page 60: We encourage including Nancy Drew in the adventure as it represents great cross-marketing with our other adventure series. We would think it goes without saying, however, that she would not have, nor even contemplate, surgical enhancement. Please delete all references to her "killer rack."
Page 72: While we understand that violence is a necessary part of any adventure series, we think it best that it be downplayed and referred to as delicately as possible. Neither Frank nor Joe has ever "popped a cap" in anyone's posterior and they never will. Furthermore, we would prefer that Joe's "going medieval" on the villain in this scene explicitly refer to a swift uppercut punch. Period.
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